Read the fanfic a few days ago, and reading the sequel now.. This picture is quite good, manages to capture the horrors but still have the neon lights from the liquid rainbows mixed in without feeling too.. how to put it.. Las Vegas. You've managed to keep it scary and dark despite the colorfulness and neon-effects, which is amazing
And the look on their faces capture Rainbows madness and Scoots sadness perfectly. Feels like this is the exact moment before scoot says "....You have beautiful eyes"